Can i dare to comment on your wonderful poem?
well –

Its not God that loses ‘herself ‘in creating the human form-
The bird is innocent, un-self conscious, cause it doesnt have an ego to wrestle with
while the intelligence of the human gives it a self-consciousness producing an ego – the apple in the ‘garden of eden’
the love affair does indeed begin – that of life and the struggle against the ego
to become innocent like the bird
God cannot interfere – his creation is free as he ordained to, do as it wishes – no puppets here,

two forces now interplay
matter as the ego, disillusioned
and spirit as the innocent song of the bird.

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